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Lol, better, but no bannanas.

It was better because:
+++ doesn't end in a loop
++ actually has a point to it
++ isnt just a tween
But still not good because:
-- it was a hand instead of a black triangle
- only the heads
- i thought clocks don't have hands
- would be better if you used a clock themed preloader instead of yours

== it was much better compared to your other work, but it wasn't good enough for newgrounds. good job taking it seriously.

Holic responds:

Thanks for some serious input.
I used the hand because it's going to be my original style compared to a boring triangle. The heads were because it's "Bill Murray Week" on the CC.net, so I didn't want to add other clocks. How would he hold the gun? A floating gun would look stupid. I don't like the Murray week preloader.

There, I responded to all of your bad points.

I have something to say about this.

I watched this after "Rock and Roll nation". I don't want to insult you but,
1. Your replies are random key presses.
2. This is basically a preloader, a really, really simple background with a weird picture, some music, and a motion tween.
3.There is not a chance that you spent much work on this.

I can't believe this wasn't blammed. I have more bad things to say, but I don't want to insult you. It could use a lot more work, go read flash animating tutorials in the "Flash help" section or something.

Holic responds:

HIUBHUIHHIUHIHUHGFTYDRSDD

This is quality sprite animation.

I liked it!
The only thing I disliked was the rotating/scaling/skewing on the sprites.
Best thing I've seen under judgement in a while.

ScottFalco responds:

Thanks man,
I can see about scaling... But why rotating? Whatever tho.. it doesn't matter

I am honestly not sure I saw the whole thing.

No, really, I'm serious.
The pause when the police guy said no gangsta parties?
If I had counted it would have been like 30 seconds long or something.
And it wasn't over yet.
Was that a loop, or a pause, because if it was a pause I think you should shorten it.
If it was a loop, I can't believe you spent 3 days on it.

Holic responds:

HUTWHTHWIUHIUTWHUITHIUTW

This was actually pretty good.

I saw the name and I was curious. Pretty nice. One thing though, you might want to find more sounds (i.e. the big laser thing). A good movie overall.

MoosePower responds:

Thanks i agree with you about the sounds will do on next episode

yo i am so cool.

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